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Free verse № 158235

hollow queen

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Nov 2009 · 0 comments

expression barren with the snow cold touch my mind weathers your winter shoulder static whiteout on the edge of oblivion the mirage intangible, virtually unattainable long distance lines forging paths ahead converging at the end despite distracting ex's and oh's soft candy melting in your mouth, with one in the hand a sweet goodbye solidifying our broken bond with enduring impact on our lives Hiroshima harbor became erased in haste by the D-bomb ash falling like flakes on the last bastion of our friendship

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