poemranker ::untitle by daggatolar

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Free verse № 159114

untitle

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Nov 2009 · 2 comments

treat me with cold unable to fly remains to me and hot me how else can you surpass my own sickness of you if i don´t want you to die

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[n/a] http://mulberryfairy 7-Dec-09/3:38 PM Reply
I don't get the first verse at all. Second is nice.
[1] half.italian 22-Jan-10/11:45 PM Reply
and hot me?