poemranker ::Sense {non} by Skamper

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Free verse № 160040

Sense {non}

Member since 2007 · Posted 20 Apr 2014 · 1 comment

If hearts can be pounding, chasing blood to outer reaches- how can legs now feel so weak.. -and tell me- where does the aching -go- when your hand brushes past the wetness of my cheek If questions were never shared and hearts always spared? Would the pain be directed or somewhat deflected by the ice residing in my veins

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[6] nentwined 30-Jan-15/1:39 PM Reply
the second stanza is your poem. drop the rest. maybe explore that more, or maybe don't. 6 for the poem as whole.