poemranker ::I'm your father! by flatliner

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Haiku № 16453

I'm your father!

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

I dislike talking I drink, curse. There is no god. My son won't listen.

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[n/a] horus8 22-Sep-02/10:23 AM Reply
very multilayered...good for you...so i guess if you start listening to god..your son will start listening to you...you fail...your beak is minus the four seeded soy bean..just kidding 11!