poemranker ::Sight by monotype

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 18071

Sight

by monotype

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

Sight Blacken me away gray scale from top to bottom. Ocean me in dust from far far away. Black scrape on my skin, tear charcoal dreams away and boots kick harder when blackened at night. Nothing seen but smoky black. Electricity moving on to my dreary days shadow on, shadow to, rub more on for the effect. Smudge and re-smudge, make me black and lesser blue.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 5.13 weighted 5.03 rank 7218 views 122 View voting details →

8 votes so far. Yours would make 9.8 votes so far

2 comments

[9] nentwined 30-Sep-02/2:26 PM Reply
beautiful.
[10] <~> 30-Sep-02/3:38 PM Reply
welcome, monotype. don't need the title twice, otherwise i can find no fault with this poem. it blacks me blue, too.