Doesn't Hurt Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Sep 2002 · 9 comments

I just lost another fight, But as long as everything's right I fight only in your name with all the pain, So even when I lose there's no shame I may look tired and maybe hurt, All the bruises and bumps and a dirty shirt But as long as I'm with you, Nothing bothers me and that is true because... (Refrain) Nothing in this world hurts me, As long as your heart sets me free I maybe down and out but you will see, All of that doesn't hurt me I do have a bad reputation, That wouldn't matter anymore I'll just stay lying on the floor But won't walk out that door They still can't tell nor know how it felt, To fight a whole war all by yourself And I still don't ask for help because... (Refrain) It's crazy to see in your eyes All of my sacrifice But my heart will still fly As long as you are mine because... (Refrain x2)

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9 comments

[9] devina 10-Oct-02/2:43 AM Reply

This must be a song... you're a great songwriter... You should show somebody your talent, cause this was really great.

[10] deleted user 4-May-03/10:55 AM Reply

I agree with devina, this song is excellent

[0] sliver 8-Jun-04/3:45 PM Reply

I don't see it being any better than all the poems you have given me O's on. I hadn't noticed until lately, and I have been giving you 8's and 9's. Silly me.

[n/a] wilco › sliver 8-Jun-04/4:07 PM Reply

Now see here Sliver...how can Miggy be expected to 'win' poemranker if he gives you 8s, 9s and 10s? He can't!

Incidentally, I bet if you look at your voting details and see the ones that Miggy gave you a 0 on, you'll notice that Razor and Yawnman also gave them a 0. Now look at the IPS of Miggy, Razor and Yawnman...awful peculiar.

[0] sliver › wilco 8-Jun-04/4:10 PM Reply

Yes, also Bachus, Shardick, Baby yoga, etc. etc. It's funny how two people spend so much time giving so many 0's.You can win poemranker? I thought nentwined had the ball in his court.

[n/a] wilco › sliver 8-Jun-04/4:22 PM Reply

It was a joke. Some people have this strange idea that you can "win" Poemranker I guess by having the best average.

I've never had any problem with Shardik, Horus8, etc. doing it, but Miggy/Razor/Yawman logged in 4 times under 4 different names (and anonymous) to give my "Suicide Girl" a bunch of 5s.

Anyway, it doesn't matter...just kinda funny to me that someone would waste time to do that.

[0] sliver › wilco 8-Jun-04/4:38 PM Reply

At least they were 5's. Log on to one of my poems, Probably an earlier one, and see my collection of Easter Goose Eggs.

[0] sliver › sliver 8-Jun-04/4:50 PM Reply

I also find it funny(Sad, But FUNNY) that their alter egos give them all tens. guess if your not very good you need to boost your own.

[6] i_am_the_popsicle 17-Aug-05/4:35 PM Reply

I'm not trying to sound like an elitist because it isn't bad, it just doesn't sound unlike anything I've heard before,

if you get what I'm saying