poemranker ::#14 by mikejedw

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Haiku № 1980

#14

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 May 2002 · 1 comment

Garden path in dusk-- the well-tread shale has become dark at its edges.

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[6] anonymous 15-May-02/9:07 AM Reply
not as effective as your others...if there's a way to give an impression of the the worn pathway without stating that it's "well-tread"... would give it more power and meaning - but good start. - aduren