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Lyric № 3617

To Mother

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jul 2002 · 6 comments

Death took my precious mother to a place I cannot see, Then softly, on a gently breeze, her spirit rose to Thee. As I try to picture Heaven and imagine she is there, I more often think of you, Lord, and feel she's everywhere. I see her 'midst the flowers that she loved so much on Earth Or swaying with an angel's choir, singing sweetly every verse. I see her gather loved ones and hold them to her breast... those who went before her....those who wait for all the rest. I remember all the children that she cradled in her arms; That was her mother's heart, Lord, to protect them from all harm. Death took my precious mother to a place I cannot see, But she left a mother's gentle love, her legacy to me.

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6 comments

[8] nentwined 9-Jul-02/3:15 PM Reply
very beautiful, though I'm no theist.
[10] forestchild7 9-Jul-02/3:16 PM Reply
awww.... how sweet and sad... very good poem though... I'm sorry about your mother...
[6] horus8 9-Jul-02/6:17 PM Reply
touching to say the least
[9] PatColvin 9-Jul-02/7:25 PM Reply
Lovely! God bless you, Lynn!
[10] livingcanvas 1-Sep-02/10:37 PM Reply
i would recommend reading this to all i know. absolutely beautiful. very well versed as well. i appreciate works that people write in memory of family. your mother would be, and i'm sure she is, very proud of you. 10
[9] TLRufener 12-Jun-04/7:20 AM Reply
Beautiful. I love the imagery. Very touching.