Free verse № 1992

Cancel that thought

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 May 2002 · 4 comments

Whenever I am hungry I try to eat something, Sometimes I dont really care Whether its fish or fishfingers, But sometimes I am quite particular And want only certain things. Quite some time ago I happened to see the sun rise, It didn't happen very quickly But then I didn't expect it to. I fell asleep before it was fully up, I was quite tired for the rest of the day.

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4 comments

[1] anonymous 15-May-02/9:33 AM Reply

Jeez, your crap!

[1] anonymous 15-May-02/1:04 PM Reply

can't say this did much for me.

[6] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-May-02/5:32 PM Reply

Excellent work. I love the way you carried the theme from the first verse right through the rest of the poem. Cancel that thought.

[8] -=SeTTle=- 30-Jul-02/8:33 PM Reply

YOU SAUCY DANUBE MAIDEN