poemranker ::Two Towers by Tascobar

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Free verse № 20208

Two Towers

by Tascobar

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Oct 2002 · 8 comments

You wait for a plane, Seemingly never on time. Then two come along.

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8 comments

[7] Tarquin De La Bog 14-Oct-02/5:23 AM Reply
I think you have opened a can of worms here. Dangerously offensive, but then I like work which challenges the stereotype of acceptableness. 7, for sheer bravado.
[8] god'swife 14-Oct-02/8:17 AM Reply
I like this poem's subtlety. It works for me.
[9] yoda's aprentice 14-Oct-02/11:06 AM Reply
oh the irony, could cause offense but I like it, it's really good
well done
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › yoda's aprentice 14-Oct-02/11:08 AM Reply
yoda's aprentice, stick around. You know how much I value your opinion, and tonight I post my Magnum Anus...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Oct-02/11:09 AM Reply
This poeme is good, but I would change the title to "WTF?!?!"
[3] poetandknowit 14-Oct-02/1:28 PM Reply
But are you really waiting for a plane if you are at work in WTF? I would have liked this more if they had crashed into an airport.
[0] t_t_redhot 28-Oct-02/6:53 AM Reply
it is amazing how you could talk bad about my work when what you write has no real meaning. simple it may be but anyone can write a few line down and call it a poem.
[n/a] Tascobar › t_t_redhot 8-Nov-02/7:39 AM Reply
No, what is amazing is your clear lack of intellect. Tell me, can you feed yourself?