Out Doubt!

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 May 2002 · 7 comments

I cast you out! No longer shall I tarry, No more fey wanness, No indecision,vacilliation, or cowardice. No caprice. I know exactly what I want, I know how to get it, Why I want it, What I will do with it when I have it. Everything is as clear as crystal. I see everything now.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-May-02/9:09 AM Reply

Do you? Do you really know what you want? That's not what mummy thinks.

[2] hoopoe 19-May-02/6:32 AM Reply

what then, what do you want???

whjy wait to write this, who do you have to tell? why tease the reader?? what do you see that is this everything?????? is it still?
(vacillation by the way)

[7] Amelia 18-Jul-02/6:12 PM Reply

There are words like vacillation and caprice and wanness, although I do not see how one can be fey and wan at the same time. Wacillation is spelt without an 'i'. I like this poem because for a change someone used the word "tarry". :-)

[n/a] lastobelus › Amelia 31-Jan-04/6:20 AM Reply

??? The original (and still often used) meaning of fey goes so well together with wan that it's almost a redundancy.

[7] Amelia 18-Jul-02/6:13 PM Reply

That's Vacillation sorry, typo

[5] Ming T. Merciless 24-Aug-02/7:44 AM Reply

Shrouded in ambiguity, but the structure adds to its vague nature still remaining linear. I just hope for your sake, that 'Caprice' is merely imagery and not a reference to last months FHM.

[5] dancin_n_da_moonlite 16-Mar-05/5:53 PM Reply

large word cant save a poem - 5