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Haiku № 21128

sex

by Limness

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Oct 2002 · Edited 18 Oct 2002 · 10 comments

young man, you and I tug and coil without music or wisdom or hope

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10 comments

[9] knickytoy 18-Oct-02/12:12 PM Reply
Safe sex?
[9] cobalt 18-Oct-02/12:32 PM Reply
he was that bad?
[9] knickytoy 18-Oct-02/12:41 PM Reply
Did you just change the title?C
[n/a] Limness › knickytoy 18-Oct-02/12:45 PM Reply
yes. i took my cue from you.
[9] knickytoy 18-Oct-02/12:54 PM Reply
How about bootie call?
[10] god'swife 18-Oct-02/1:30 PM Reply
Ain't it the truth. Young and dumb.
[5] poetandknowit 18-Oct-02/2:11 PM Reply
tug just ruins this. and you are easy!?
[n/a] Limness › poetandknowit 18-Oct-02/3:53 PM Reply
i used 'tug and coil' because he quoted it to me, from 'quickie'.
and as for being easy, hypothetically, yes, i am as easy as i want to be. practically, no. i call the shots, and this did not happen. nor will it, because there is no music in him, and a great urge to tug. so, no hope.
[7] Bachus 7-Dec-02/5:08 PM Reply
yes, we do.
[9] UnityMitford 9-Dec-02/10:58 AM Reply
this brings me down. depressing and wonderful, like the end of something. 9 swastikas!