Rain Doesn't Seem to Stop

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

For two months now It hasnt stop The neverending rainfall The floods have begun to run ravagedly Like mad man who have been released from seclusion I can only put my head above the countless inches that plan to take my very essence The rain which started so long ago has made us all forget when it started When will this end!! When will we be forgived for whatever wrong we have committed I slowly start to fall below and wonder has this tradegy happened because of my non-faith

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[5] horus8 26-Oct-02/8:35 AM Reply

alright noah...but can you side stroke the suez canal?

[1] Tintagiles 26-Oct-02/6:32 PM Reply

This poem definitely is a tradegy. A great tradegy.

[4] Crakyamuni 26-Dec-02/1:11 PM Reply

My thoughtful friend we are now aquatic mammals! Our brand of debauchery is despised from here to there. The change starts with you, and it (unfortunately or not for us), ends there as well.