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Free verse № 22734

survival of the weakest

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Oct 2002 · 7 comments

desperately hanging onto what remains but a shallow grave floods quickly sinking captain with your ship why try to survive, you're sickly? broke all the pieces left to breathe forgot about the pounding heart just another muscle to pull, to stretch lost the lust of libido just another organ to donate, to share how could you confuse the two why try to survive, you're not one to care? alone becomes a frightening word only when you use it more then once before then it is a welcomed change to dying for a life thats beyond itself why try to survive...

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[6] Christof 28-Oct-02/7:37 AM Reply
Why not?
[n/a] brazen › Christof 28-Oct-02/2:04 PM Reply
ssh...stay calm...i'm still here.
[4] -=SeTTle=- 28-Oct-02/8:10 AM Reply
wait is this poem about cutting off your own shaft 'n' balls?? if not I don't get it. perhaps next time you will use the term shaft 'n' balls.
[n/a] brazen › -=SeTTle=- 28-Oct-02/2:02 PM Reply
technically i believe you are right...its more about not caring enough to do/feel anything, so cutting off my shaft 'n' balls and handing them out to children after i coat them in a few layers of chocolate would make some sense.
[6] Bachus 28-Oct-02/10:31 AM Reply
What? i suppose the reverse couldn't be argued either? you sir have od in willy wonka's chocolate factory and the oompa loompas gang raped you on the marshmallow bank of the butterscotch river...here's to the trials of life! 10!-9+5= my middle finger! 6.
[n/a] brazen › Bachus 28-Oct-02/2:03 PM Reply
why must i always be reminded of that one bad trip...why i ask? on a side note, chocolate dildos melt really really quick.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 2-Jan-03/10:23 PM Reply
between you, and me? to see just how fucking expensive movie candy can get.