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by Tekara

Member since 2001 · Posted 19 May 2002 · 3 comments

Long, silken hair falls Sweat drops from skin, unheeded Ah... the long drought ends

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[8] deleted user 12-Jun-02/7:41 PM Reply

this poem is sexy

[8] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Aug-02/8:38 AM Reply

If someone uses a word like "Ah" or "Oh" in a Haiku it means only one thing: They're struggling to get the syllable count right. Not bad though. Perhaps I'll let you off with a stern warning. Or would you prefer six-of-the-best (trousers down) ?

[n/a] Tekara › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Sep-02/12:33 AM Reply

<grins> Surprisingly enough, I had several words that would have the correct count, but that just seemed to fit better.