poemranker ::The Second World by seebergerb

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Free verse № 2420

The Second World

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 May 2002 · 3 comments

The red tears of Midgard flood the plains, wash over grass and turn the seas into fire - the gods stand by in ordinary clothes and fill the air with light. My frozen hands grow cold, my mouth is silent - the world around me grows still, the wind slows and the sky is like a stone. Mutiny spreads her silver wings, and sacrifices the alms of mortality on the table of innocence with the pounding of a sceptre.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jul-02/2:59 PM Reply
My God. Metaphor AND reification?!?!?! What will you think of next??
[7] horus8 14-Jul-02/11:33 PM Reply
Loki loves to piss in Odin's cheerios. Mischievous little rebel half brother bastard father to a giant snake. I love Mythology
[8] Holden 22-Jul-02/1:22 PM Reply
Deep and Powerful