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Transform

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Nov 2002 · 0 comments

Your face transparent in the moonlight Almost forgotten Giggling in mad delight You hover Your patience commended Full face shadowy, demented You talk Care, I cannt accomplish Stealthy you My guilt you demolish My face Skin of concience melting Not I But I cold heart beating

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