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You wouldn't Accept

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

I gave you a chance, you couldn't accept it. I gave you my mind, you didn't accept me. I gave you a gift, you didn't accept it. I gave you my heart, you didn't accept me. I gave you a rose, you couldn't accept it. I gave you the truth, you didn't accept me. I gave you a kiss, you didn't accept it. I gave you my passion, you didn't accept me. I gave you a ring, you wouldn't accept it. Afterwards I gave you nothing more, I knew you wouldn't accept me.

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[6] Caducus 15-Nov-02/1:36 AM Reply
Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 12-Dec-02/2:15 PM Reply
a witches wart shant ne'er thwart..n