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How Could You Leave

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

How could you leave me standing here? Alone in my sorrow and pain, leaving me, with nothing, left to gain. How could you leave me standing here? My body drenched in crimson tide, now all lost I fell I should've never tried. How could you leave me standing here? Trapped within the storm of lost, my want to live was the gravest cost. How could you leave me standing here? Carried away by your mister, I tried to yell, but to no avail, for itcame out only as a silent whisper.

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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 12-Dec-02/2:12 PM Reply
ha! ha! what a ringer...s