poemranker ::The first gurl 2 eva hurt ma by Jazz_t

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Free verse № 32180

The first gurl 2 eva hurt ma

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Dec 2002 · 5 comments

my heart hurts seein u in pain pained me i said i like u u said u like me 2 our first kiss was better den any be4 my eyes were on u and urs were on me and wat i thought i saw was a angel that i had to know the barriers between us finally broke to have others put up u listened to other people instead of ur heart and by u not listening to urs u hurt mine i never liked a gurl as much as i did u but i wasnt hurt by a gurl as much as i was by u i looked at ur chest to see if my heart was there but it wasnt then and there i knew my love wasnt to be returned it was to be left in a box on a drawer a gurl could never have it dey would hurt it

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5 comments

[0] poetandknowit 28-Dec-02/12:23 AM Reply
These are the times when I wish Prince never existed.
[2] <~> › poetandknowit 28-Dec-02/12:26 AM Reply
hey, lay off! this iz whut it soundz like...when duvvs krie.
[0] poetandknowit › <~> 28-Dec-02/12:35 AM Reply
I think the gurl hit the poor ole ma with a fryin' pan. Whaddya thinkin'? It was the furst in (insert schwa here)long line ofa gurls to pound and pound on the poor ma who didda nuthin but knit all the day long.
[2] <~> › poetandknowit 28-Dec-02/12:40 AM Reply
well if'n she'd-a raised him right, he wouldna taken up with a floozy the likes a-her. tarnation!
[0] wOrnella Mutiw 28-Dec-02/12:53 AM Reply
r u & old man river lovers? Hooked on Phonics could possibly work for you, possibly not.