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missing you

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Nov 2002 · Edited 19 Nov 2002 · 5 comments

I remember when I used to wait with baited breath for your call We discussed it all Then we would discuss it again That was when you would tell me a dirty joke Then poke fun at my reaction Then came lives and distraction The calls began to fade

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[8] Christof 19-Nov-02/8:03 AM Reply

The bit about the dirty joke is good, but I don't think you need the last two lines. It would be better left to just tail off, like your relationship.

[n/a] Goose › Christof 19-Nov-02/8:28 AM Reply

I agree with you. Thanks for the input. I have dropped those last two lines and I like it lots better.

[8] Christof › Goose 19-Nov-02/8:30 AM Reply

I'm glad I could help! I hink it works much better now

[6] Caducus 19-Nov-02/8:15 AM Reply

i agree with chrisof

[n/a] poetandknowit 19-Nov-02/10:14 PM Reply

I agree with Christof Cad and goose.