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With Sleepless Breath...

by LovingWhispers

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

In the comfort of our silence Into your naked chest I turn my face to kiss your warmth And sigh with sleepless breath My lips touch softly on your skin Captivated as they rest Recalling and re-tasting I crave with sleepless breath Are you dreaming now my lover, Of our sensual rhythmic dance Do you feel my loving presence As I stroke your gorgeous hands When I think about us making love My desires are caressed Here in your soothing aura I am content with sleepless breath

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[n/a] <~> 26-Nov-02/8:21 PM Reply
a very comforting chant, but, this line feels awkward in sound: "When I think about us making love "