The Trail

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Nov 2002 · 6 comments

I have been wondering for so long. I can't seem to escape the darkness that follows swiftly behind me I make snap decisions on which way to go but still they follow relentlessly like savages after their pray I'm tired and I have lost all will to care if they... but just then a trail opens and its bright light seems to beckon for my arrival, so I go. Just as I am walking through the trail it closes and I am enveloped by the light that has now faded into what I feared the most and it now seems my salvation has turned out to be my downfall. It seems no one can trust what they see at first

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[4] Caducus 20-Nov-02/5:41 AM Reply

is this finished? its not a poem and as a piece of literature its woefully uninspiring.
Keep on writing though, you can do it

[4] Caducus 20-Nov-02/5:41 AM Reply

is this finished? its not a poem and as a piece of literature its woefully uninspiring.
Keep on writing though, you can do it

[n/a] god'swife 20-Nov-02/8:35 AM Reply

Too many words, too little content.

[2] sliver 20-Nov-02/11:19 AM Reply

Trust not what you see-Go with what you know

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › sliver 20-Nov-02/11:50 AM Reply

How thoughtful.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Nov-02/11:52 AM Reply

What a terrifying twist. Who would have thought your salvation would turn out to be your downfall? NOT ME THAT'S FOR SURE!!!11