poemranker ::Beginning or End? by xdarkxangelx24

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Beginning or End?

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Blood slowly trickles down my hand. The source is my wide open veins. I'm Beginning to feel light-headed. Is my life going to end or begin in a new way? Why do people love life so much? What's the point of the hurting? So much pain, suffering, greif,and anguish. Whats the point? My heart begins to beat harder and slower, my breathing gets tougher to do. My body is paralyzed. Is this life or death? Is this the way you are supposed to live; in pain? Whats the point? Finally my heart stops and so does my breathing. Is this the end or just a brand new beginning?

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4 comments

[n/a] Caducus 22-Nov-02/9:06 AM Reply
I think its the end !
For your keyboard that is, for Xmas I will buy you an enter button
and a spring
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Nov-02/10:17 AM Reply
If anyone is still wondering why I ironically chose the name '-=Dark_Angel=-', please observe.

Unless this person is a second-order troll, which I doubt.
[0] horus8 22-Nov-02/11:43 AM Reply
neither. it's the figure four leg lock by greg the hammer valentine.
[0] razorgrin 25-Nov-02/6:51 AM Reply
it's the end. unless you're a pansy horizontally slitting his wrists for attention.