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Free verse № 26459

He Told Me Once

by anitawit

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

He told me once Your tears, like stormy waters gone berserk Ransack my heart Be they gently flowing or violent, they Tear me apart Since then, I have contrived In gross and subtle way By tears shed and unshed Torture, every day.

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[8] <~> 2-Jan-03/9:17 PM Reply
he must enjoy this torture, rapturously. if he stays to be tormented further.
[n/a] anitawit › <~> 2-Jan-03/9:49 PM Reply
he decided to stay, but the torment has lost its keen, much to my dismay!