poemranker ::special friend by emilys369

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Free verse № 27942

special friend

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Nov 2002 · Edited 26 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

You are born, An innocent being, Your whole life ahead of you, It's not guaranteeing. Its a few years later, You're starting to change, Life seems ok, But things start to rearrange. Now is the time, Its time to start thinking, Worrying about your actions, It's then you start sinking. You start to feel lonely Your life turns black and white, Don't know where to go, Don't know wrong from right. Alone in the world, No one understands, You're in a black hole, You're in shifting sands. You're lost in the maze, The maze of no end, Don't want to go farther, Don't want to pretend. Then that special friend comes, They show you the light, They take you by the hand, And bring you out of the night. They bring back the colors, Show you not to cry, They take away the bad words, And teach you how to fly. They wrap their arms around you, Tell you they're yours forever, And that they will always be there, Through life's biggest endeavor. They'll do anything they can, To fulfill your biggest dreams, They just want you to be happy, And take life to its extreme. So when life seems at its end, You're special friend will come along, And life will take a turn for good, Because with them you do belong.

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[10] bluehearts12 1-Dec-02/5:49 AM Reply
Great poem! very believable, and lifelike...sounds like you've had expierience..keep writing!!!