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Free verse № 291

Eggshells in Wet Grass

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 3 comments

Tied to Shy of Blanketed around Speak softly? Eggshells In wet grass When spring has sprung And I have spread my wings

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3 comments

[9] anonymous 7-Aug-01/2:22 PM Reply
I like the way the first four lines build a feeling of hesitance. Works well.
[9] nentwined 8-Jun-02/3:40 PM Reply
interesting. i find my thoughts dancing through it. :)
[5] hamgurl 28-Jul-02/6:36 PM Reply
I dont get that one.