March

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Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Dec 2002 · 11 comments

swept clean, up starts grow through melt and mud: daffodils laugh, yellow and green

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[n/a] Caducus 19-Dec-02/6:44 AM Reply

If only it were spring, you tease us with warmer climes. Is melt and mud the season change, my ever fragrant zzinnia?

[n/a] <~> › Caducus 19-Dec-02/6:49 AM Reply

indeed it is. benrice was writing month poems, and i was inspired.

[n/a] <~> › Caducus 19-Dec-02/6:56 AM Reply

p.s.--zinnias are not fragrant. zzinnia hardly ever wears a scent, preferring to notice rather than be noticed.

[10] UnityMitford › <~> 19-Dec-02/7:41 AM Reply

i think cadacus has a hard-on. don't turn your back on him! this is very nice. daffodil is one of those words that flies off the tongue, as though a poem in itself. 10 swastikas!

[n/a] Caducus › UnityMitford 19-Dec-02/9:26 AM Reply

Whats a hard on? my brother says he has them and they bruise his knees

[n/a] ecargo 19-Dec-02/10:10 AM Reply

Purty.

[8] poetandknowit 19-Dec-02/10:55 AM Reply

March is Colorado's snowiest month. So it is good you took this to CT and made it your own rather than leave it out here in the BenRice haiku. It is a desert out here. We need more vocabulary for the many shades of brown. If it were not for the immense blue sky, white-capped mountains and non-native evergreen we would all perish and be blinded to whiteness out here. Very nice in your country.

[10] INTRANSIT 19-Dec-02/4:49 PM Reply

Beauty, as usual.

[9] Quarton › INTRANSIT 19-Dec-02/6:45 PM Reply

Great imagery in only three short lines. This is easily
a nine.

[10] Ranger 20-Dec-02/4:29 AM Reply

Good stuff! Definately a 9, can't decide if it's enough for a ten...sod it, 10

[9] lastobelus 12-Mar-03/5:47 PM Reply

very nice...