poemranker ::Wrong by Sugarbbybuttrfly

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Free verse № 31690

Wrong

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Dec 2002 · 3 comments

The burning pain, inside me Hurts like a bitch, and wont let me be I hurt those I love, and make them cry I have to sit and watch, another tear fall from their eye I'm lost in the dark, without a light Everything I do, I start a fight I am scared, of what may be What is wrong, wrong with me

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[5] <~> 24-Dec-02/6:56 PM Reply
you have a yeast infection, and PMS. see your local chemist for some OTC relief. everyone will thank you.
[6] brazen 24-Dec-02/10:01 PM Reply
stop stealing your dad's computer for one...
[n/a] Sugarbbybuttrfly › brazen 24-Dec-02/10:08 PM Reply
but...but...I like stealing things from him! He doesnt deserve it ne ways. Hes mean. Maybe next time I'll just steal ur computer...I like that idea.