I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN?

by bondjedi

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Dec 2002 · 7 comments

won too tree for five sicks seven ate niner ten eleven twelve YEAH!!!!!!

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7 comments

[2] nentwined 29-Dec-02/2:23 AM Reply

that's pretty bad.

[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 29-Dec-02/12:14 PM Reply

the best thing about this? the word 'ku. that is all. carry on

[0] Ranger 29-Dec-02/1:47 PM Reply

Aaarrgghh, my eyes, my beautiful eyes...

[0] wOrnella Mutiw 30-Dec-02/4:28 AM Reply

you better take some ku lessons from snoop, or me of course.

[n/a] Quarton › wOrnella Mutiw 5-Jan-03/6:01 AM Reply

So you reinvented the Haiku? Trashed would
be closer to fact. At least you are limiting
yourself to three lines.

[n/a] Quarton › Quarton 7-Jan-03/6:22 PM Reply

Upon further reflection, I believe my words
were overly harsh. Some of your haikus are
okay and you seem to have a knack for them.
Why not try different subjects like nature,
paradox or philosophy. You might surprise me
and yourself. Good luck and sorry for the
unwarranted comments though your comments on
my poem were also unwarranted and juvenile.

[10] horus8 24-Jul-03/1:29 PM Reply

Thrilling.