poemranker ::our morning bed by daniella

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our morning bed

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jul 2002 · Edited 14 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

he has red wings and lies before me. daily i chance his profile as he turns away upon waking. particles of our lives float in the streaking beams of our closed windows. in the tiny veins and broken stem of our daily good-byes a leaf pattern is present. i hold it up to the light insect-like. i snap my fingers to see if he can fly, his clammy wings are still. i simply smile- running my hand over his small parts.

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[9] god'swife 15-Oct-02/12:05 AM Reply
Please do not disappear. I need you here. The way a mule needs a steady and knowing kick. Love the title
[n/a] daniella › god'swife 8-Oct-17/8:57 PM Reply
how is it i never saw these posts!
[9] Christof 15-Oct-02/7:54 AM Reply
This is great. I'm really enjoying your stuff, Daniella. The fragility of these images catches at the throat.
[n/a] daniella › Christof 8-Oct-17/9:03 PM Reply
where can i find you now... after so many years?
[9] Christof › daniella 13-Oct-17/2:22 AM Reply
I'm still here! I got a notification that you read one of my poems. Nce to know someone still reads my stuff after so long. How are you?