Snow Storm

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

Once upon a twilight dusk Silver haired angels sailed thru and thru Laughing in delight Spreading halo dust all around Mystical whimsy twas the hour For the hour all was good

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[n/a] Artemis745 11-Oct-03/10:40 AM Reply

The last line does not fit the rest of the poem very well. A little work on it and this poem would be fairly good.