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Tanka

Member since 2001 · Posted 7 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

The ferns shade our walk The cool air energises We take the long track Our bodies close through loves warmth We're lifted again.

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[9] <~> 30-Aug-02/7:44 AM Reply
sweet. pure. so very necessary.