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Free verse № 33081

Bliss Eternal

by Freethinker1602

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Jan 2003 · Edited 25 Jul 2003 · 10 comments

Can I be your love? For you are my life Every thought dwells On you Every breath wakeful To the memories of us Let's just disappear To a place of comfort And know the love Of which I only find in you I melt in your arms You my gaurdian, My life

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10 comments

[5] cobalt 1-Jan-03/9:58 PM Reply
that's harsh. if only you could just get love when you needed it. damn it just don't work that way.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 › cobalt 1-Jan-03/11:54 PM Reply
hey there you should email me some time...
[n/a] horus8 › Freethinker1602 6-Jan-03/11:14 AM Reply
GLADE.
[n/a] wOrnella Mutiw 1-Jan-03/9:59 PM Reply
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[5] cobalt › wOrnella Mutiw 1-Jan-03/10:28 PM Reply
very pretty.
[10] ChunkyHunkyMonkey 2-Jan-03/5:22 PM Reply
good poem i like it its great
it reminds me of great times i had :)
[7] Bachus 2-Jan-03/8:06 PM Reply
exculpate at once, then sand your left leg to varnish with 150 grain paper. surfing trip to costa rica also work wonders. if this is true, good. if not, you should move to italy, and become an aids activist. seriously. my friend just got out of the peace corp, and i watched him turn a loaf of bread into a hovercraft complete with a banquet of swine spitted goodies and sani huts..truly..it was fucking mind boggling, but as luck would have it's always about 'pork' no 'copper'. maybe he should try a mracle were he turn a pillow case full of euro's into a vat of mercury, than we'll sell the mercury for hard cash for venezualain oil and thirteen year old hookers. whatta ya think. too cryptic? yeah, probably.
[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/9:04 PM Reply
this is soooo beautiful lol ^_^ hey mbe l8er we can get together?? ok asl
[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-Jan-03/4:09 PM Reply
What are you doing to me!? I feel tired and weak.... You're draining my Life Force, aren't you!? Curse you, Psi~Vamp!
[0] Tintagiles 31-Jan-03/7:30 AM Reply
Lose the damn explaining paragraph. No one gives a damn, sweetheart.