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Think About It

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

I think I've heard enough Of your heartaches, my friend Don't think I am tired of you I just want to put your suffering to an end I hate to see you cry I don't want you to be hurt Can't you see that all he did Is to leave you upset and burned? Oh, he may have done something special For him to be loved by you But it seems he's changed lately Because you're always black and blue I want to be strong for you Now that I see your shoulders sag From the burden he cast upon you Making you think life's a drag I know you will say that I just don't understand And it's too easy for me to say You should go on separate ways Because I don't feel the way you feel But, my friend, that's what made me see what is real It's time you let go of the lies, the fears and the tears You never deserved them anyway, not in a million years But it's not for me to decide What you should do with your life Only you hold the key To what the future will bring So give it a thought, my friend And put your suffering to an end.

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[7] shwenatjadeflower 11-Jul-02/11:52 PM Reply
very very sentimental