poemranker ::The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=-

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The Lady

by -=??lilaznjen??=-

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

There is the lady She is at an altar She is getting married With a man named Walter.

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[2] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Jul-02/6:21 PM Reply
When I read this I sneezed towards the end, and in the confusion thought it said "With a naked man named Walter". This would have been quite amusing. However, as I regained my senses I was disappointed. Also, I wonder why you chose 'With' and not 'To' - is Walter not the lady's bridegroom, but merely someone who has accompanied her to the wedding?
[2] Bachus 3-Aug-02/11:29 PM Reply
No kidding. Well in that case.
There is the man. He is at an satanic alter. He is getting kinky. With a man named "poetry that leads to divorce". Beware Lady
[5] Edna Sweetlove 17-Aug-06/4:18 PM Reply
Genius.
[5] Edna Sweetlove › Edna Sweetlove 29-Aug-06/7:44 AM Reply
When I said "genius", I made a typo. I meant "shit".