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Free verse № 34107

lost love

by cherish

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Jan 2003 · 33 comments

Now that your gone what do I do? You want to move on but I only love you. I cant believe this happened but it did. Its true, true that my life is messed up and screwed. I dont know what to think nor do or say. But I know what I wish for, a better life, no pain. No one can understand how I felt yesterday. No one knows how I still love you today. Today tomorrow and the next day on. I love you until the end when we are both gone. Still what will I do until that day comes? My heart hurts bad and my body is numb. My head aches from heartaches of my lost love. Also in hopes of one day being together one day up above.

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33 comments

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/9:20 AM Reply
My God! This poeme is so beautiful! 10/10!!!!!!!11
[n/a] cherish › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-Jan-03/4:44 PM Reply
thank you soooo much
I love this poem too. It is one of my favoritis that I wrote. I have another I have to put on here soon you need to read.
I wrote this one and the one I am talking about above bc me n my boyfriend. LONG STORY...-cherish
[10] minuteswithu 10-Jan-03/1:55 PM Reply
Excellent work. 10.
[10] ropeytrajectory 10-Jan-03/1:59 PM Reply
Pretty Unique. 10.
[10] slapmeonthepatio 10-Jan-03/2:00 PM Reply
I know what u mean. Asl?
[10] deleted user 10-Jan-03/2:01 PM Reply
At least it isn't ascii art am I right lol 10
[10] TmaraZ112 10-Jan-03/2:02 PM Reply
Rort. Abort. Have a 01!, which is 10 factorial reflected in your hand mirror.
[9] -=SeTTle=- › TmaraZ112 10-Jan-03/2:12 PM Reply
I wish I could give it a 3628800 lol I wish someone would give one of my poems a 362880.
[10] dmzoacan 10-Jan-03/2:03 PM Reply
I'd crank it up to 11 if I could dude. nice one, I know what ur going through.
[10] PoeTech › dmzoacan 10-Jan-03/2:09 PM Reply
lol spinal tap lol
[10] Jeremi 10-Jan-03/2:05 PM Reply
holy mallard helicopters cherish (not that I'm into aeronautic persuits) but this gets my vote as the most interesting piece I've read all week. Have a 10, mang.
[9] -=SeTTle=- 10-Jan-03/2:06 PM Reply
So you're the new girl everyone's talking about. Eh, I'll give you a 9.
[10] RGallet 10-Jan-03/2:07 PM Reply
I especially like the last 2 lines. Have a well deserved 10. The craft of this is pretty great.
[n/a] Bachus 10-Jan-03/2:07 PM Reply
yes, i concure, do you concure horus?o
[9] -=SeTTle=- › Bachus 10-Jan-03/2:11 PM Reply
You know it lol asl?
[10] PoeTech 10-Jan-03/2:08 PM Reply
It is pretty wonderful. I want to see more work like this - a lot more. Create a new username for yourself if you have to.
[10] RGallet › PoeTech 10-Jan-03/2:18 PM Reply
I think she should work on quality, not quanitity
[9] -=SeTTle=- › RGallet 10-Jan-03/2:20 PM Reply
I think she should work on both. Altough to be frank I don't think it's right to have like 100 usernames, it messes with poemranker.
[10] PoeTech › -=SeTTle=- 10-Jan-03/2:21 PM Reply
lol you wanna say that to horus' face I thought not lol
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 10-Jan-03/2:12 PM Reply
indubitably..oh, you meant horus horus..my bad. still, i do indeed agree wholeheartedly without hesitation.
[10] RGallet › Jeremi B. Handrinos 10-Jan-03/2:17 PM Reply
Dude ur horus I'm your numero uno fan!! I got like a mondo picture of u stole it from supercuts lol
[n/a] horus8 10-Jan-03/3:42 PM Reply
not ony will i foster the motion to send this poem straight to uranus, but i'll smile all the way through
until i hit poo. ANARCHY!!!!!!!!!!
<mayday mayday baboons have infiltrated the joy luck club
and car wash, we are doomed may day>i
[n/a] horus8 10-Jan-03/8:25 PM Reply
i wrote you song for your sexy achievement..enjoy
yours truly

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[9] Caducus 11-Jan-03/2:21 AM Reply
liked this immensely 9
[7] Freethinker1602 12-Jan-03/9:15 PM Reply
zactly. To the point. Wel written. Up above though? I still believe in it and have faith, but no devotion. Hey Check out may I still my heart or something like that. I think that we both write love well. And many ppl do speak of you. That is one of the first positive things that darky has said. She jests at ppl that are a threat to her. Prepare she will try to twist the blade in your back.
[10] ChunkyHunkyMonkey 14-Jan-03/5:36 PM Reply
DAMN DIS IS WELL WRITTEN POEM NO DOUBT OF A 10 IF I COULD I WILL GO HIGHER BUT I CANT SORRY
[0] deleted user › ChunkyHunkyMonkey 15-Jan-03/4:01 PM Reply
lame
[8] deleted user 15-Jan-03/3:08 PM Reply
Well written
[0] deleted user › deleted user 15-Jan-03/4:01 PM Reply
lamer
[0] deleted user 15-Jan-03/4:02 PM Reply
lamest
[n/a] horus8 › deleted user 15-Jan-03/4:44 PM Reply
Nice volvo, but are you -=Dark_Angel=-?
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › horus8 16-Jan-03/1:30 AM Reply
No.
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