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inside me

by cherish

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Jan 2003 · 8 comments

i cover my eyes so you wont feel my pain, and so you wont even try to see it

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8 comments

[8] Ranger 7-Jan-03/1:52 AM Reply
Not bad. Hits hard for a three-liner.
[n/a] cherish › Ranger 8-Jan-03/4:38 PM Reply
thank you so much
[7] Caducus 7-Jan-03/8:49 AM Reply
I was hoping for filth and got this purity ------huh ? its good though as ranger says it says a lot with so little -7-
[0] razorgrin 7-Jan-03/9:58 AM Reply
you could always gouge out your eyes with an electric mixer. problem solved!
[n/a] cherish › razorgrin 8-Jan-03/4:36 PM Reply
maybe i will try that next time lol
[0] razorgrin 7-Jan-03/10:00 AM Reply
you should write something more intersting about things inside you. Nachos, intestinal bacteria, government tracking implants, rapidly forming pimples, herpes, a mcdonald's toy you ate when you were 4, no less than six separate penises...
[n/a] cherish › razorgrin 8-Jan-03/4:37 PM Reply
ok...
[n/a] BrandonW 11-Jan-03/8:15 PM Reply
Damnit.. hoping for filth also