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his hair is an acid trip

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

his hair is an acid trip cascading down his pebble features in a fountain of color music and laughter. his curls bounce along creating mystical magical fantasies in the minds of innocent girls. they laugh and giggle and whisper and murmur of the world around them they moan when he in an instant silences their voices with a purple bandana.

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[6] nentwined 10-Jan-03/6:07 PM Reply
umm. erm. hrm. interesting?
[n/a] horus8 10-Jan-03/6:28 PM Reply
jimmi hendrix, robert plant, or steven tyler...wait jerry garcia...i just got the montery rock festival on dvd..jimmies set, just kicks ass..he does this version of like a rolling stone that's un fucking real..truly...great poem by the way, and title.
[10] Bachus 10-Jan-03/6:31 PM Reply
it's david lee roth no!!!!!!!!
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 10-Jan-03/6:34 PM Reply
when i first scanned it my mind said banana, and i just kinda laughed..you know what i mean?