poemranker ::P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84

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P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist

by smlink84

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jan 2003 · 11 comments

Misery and shame Are his blame He suffered, For my name. The flower of spring Bloomed in winter, Light of the world Conviction like splinters. How do I thank you, How shall I praise you, From my daily bread I turn to you.

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11 comments

[n/a] deleted user 10-Jan-03/11:23 PM Reply
Why not start with a new title.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › deleted user 11-Jan-03/7:58 AM Reply
That might help. Praise jesu.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Jan-03/8:05 AM Reply
Great use of "blame" and "name" to rhyme with "shame"!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! I'M SURE YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE IN NO TIME!!!!11
[n/a] smlink84 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Jan-03/7:49 PM Reply
What's so bad about rhyming Blame name and shame? They are part of the poem and they have a distinct meaning. Like "name", Symbolic for "me".
[8] Lucifer 11-Jan-03/8:41 PM Reply
7 minutes you say. That is sure to impress everyone that has the ability to appreciate things that don't make sense. It is a nice little diddy. -=Dark_Angel=- is so confusing. She disses the wierdest things,,, and now she turns around complements ppl? I thought she was sposed to dislike obvious talent?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Lucifer 12-Jan-03/3:15 AM Reply
You will hear many things about me, my child. There are certain people who do not wish to hear my views. They are trying to stifle my creativity, crush my soul and destroy my dreams. They are lucky I have not contacted the FBI.
[n/a] smlink84 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Jan-03/7:44 PM Reply
"crush my dreams", your an idiot.
[0] horus8 12-Jan-03/12:12 PM Reply
negritude prevails. total shit.
[8] Topaz Servias 12-Jan-03/7:07 PM Reply
Hey Man-with-pants, better than mine, though mine was more confusing.;-) Gardez votre promenade avec Jesus!
[8] Topaz Servias 12-Jan-03/7:15 PM Reply
Bearded-Man says, "inerestingly excellent.
[8] Freethinker1602 8-Mar-03/7:45 PM Reply
heh. Nice.8