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Free verse № 35625

Another Day

by Brighteyes

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

When can one self claim all of their fantasies? What if the rain never stops? Could have one sweet chance not to erase the hope. Well if I feel I will... Falling asleep, I cannot stay awake. Wish I could live to see another day... When can one self hope to be more than the dream? Where does the wish finally end? Should be more than luck that brings me here to-day. Well it's not I'll die... Falling asleep, I cannot stay in time... Wish I could stay awake, another day...

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[5] Bachus 13-Jan-03/2:45 AM Reply
why bother? we could use the extra oxygen at the rate we're hacking down trees.
[5] hipster flare 13-Jan-03/9:53 AM Reply
sounds troubled--like a therapy poem. I hope you are feeling better, but you should keep therapy poems to yourself--too often thet sound exactly like this and come across as trite.