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Free verse № 34744

The Case Begins....

by Emotionz

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jan 2003 · 6 comments

The case begins, The moon is the judge, The stars are the jury, The sky is my witness, And the night is my enemy, my fear.. My heart is put on trial as My mind examines it, My eyes are questioned as it disguises my tears, My ears say what they hear But my tounge denies it, In the end im found guilty of LOVE....

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6 comments

[5] scitz 9-Jan-03/4:35 AM Reply
This was a force until line 6 then -generic ......5
[0] razorgrin 9-Jan-03/11:44 AM Reply
The first five lines show promise. The end however, sucks so hard that no amount of cinnamon toast will quench my hate. grrr..0.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › razorgrin 9-Jan-03/2:22 PM Reply
hilarious, good one.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jan-03/12:19 PM Reply
This bears a striking resemblance to an event that occurred at Luncheon to-day. Dr. Marlowe, H. Fortesque and myself were enjoying a fine gammon steak on the lawn when I felt a troubling sensation in my breeches. To cut a long story short, Dr. Marlowe had to be put down, and I was found guilty of fraud in the First Degree.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jan-03/2:24 PM Reply
a plebiscite upheavel, a true enbrowning.
[6] Tintagiles 19-Feb-04/7:12 PM Reply
Lose the last line.