Snowblind

by horus8

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Jan 2003 · 9 comments

Search party rescue With a detached retina Find what the wolves left

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[n/a] Bill Z Bub 23-Jan-03/2:05 PM Reply

neat-o

[10] god'swife 23-Jan-03/3:36 PM Reply

Get rid of 'with', change 'find' to 'finds' and then you have it. I feel this in my gut. 10.

[n/a] horus8 › god'swife 24-Jan-03/1:26 AM Reply

Tell you what sis...i'll keep that in mind, and make those changes to this haiku, if i include it in my competitive poetry manuscripts for this spring and summer's contests. thanks.

[8] INTRANSIT 23-Jan-03/4:27 PM Reply

I hate it when that happens!

[8] brazen 23-Jan-03/9:34 PM Reply

ozzy!!!

[n/a] Imperfections 24-Jan-03/12:37 AM Reply

Something about your word choice makes me conjure up images powerful enough to induce nausea. I mean that as a compliment, of course.

[10] wOrnella Mutiw 24-Jan-03/12:44 AM Reply

Care for some chai to go with the eye and liver omlet? Delicious. 10

[9] Caducus 24-Jan-03/4:59 AM Reply

Very cool. hey Horus this reminds me of Jim Morrissons poetry you should read it, this is in the same vein (retinal vein that is) *9*

[8] nentwined 26-Jan-03/11:55 AM Reply

ew :)