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Haiku № 37850

mornings, january

by <~>

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

sharp wind whips wet hair to pointed frozen tangles between house and car

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[6] Quarton 24-Jan-03/8:34 AM Reply
Seems kind of mundane for a haiku
but perhaps I am missing something.
Still, not bad and better than a
four. Hell, thinking about it,
everything is mundane to a greater
or lesser degree.
[9] horus8 24-Jan-03/2:37 PM Reply
chew it until thawed at work.
[8] nentwined 26-Jan-03/8:21 AM Reply
I like how the third line sets scale when none was there before. :)
[9] Nicholas Jones 27-Jan-03/3:52 AM Reply
In the Welsh climate my hair just gets wet. Oh for some ice and snow!