poemranker ::Jeremi and my cat oh and Elton by ~* ATHENA *~

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Jeremi and my cat oh and Elton

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

SO I better yell help. my man wears a rabbit coat while he looks at me from a bed of what used to be a long legged diatribe of acid dreams and italian ice. how nice we sit in our sand boxes and wonder can we fly if someone put us in a plane could we fly? lord knows we could run with it. innocence is controlled yet, we love the challenge of knowledge. can we have a cake and eat it time will tell. homer was blind, not blonde.

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[6] deleted user 26-Jan-03/7:14 AM Reply
I can't grip the concept, or really understand anything any of it, but i think its funny so i give it a six
[5] nentwined 26-Jan-03/7:30 AM Reply
I'm with JC on this one. ish.