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Free verse № 38118

My bedtime story

by famenglory

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

Read me another bedtime story About a princess and a dragon And the knight in shining armor Who came to save her So that he could rape and abuse The beautiful princess Because fairytales tell no ending And then they both go to his kingdom (don't they daddy?) Where he knocks her up She dies in childbirth (I miss you mommy) He becomes a drunk And now does to the child as he did to its mother Wait, thats not a bedtime story There are no princesses or dragons Only the knight whose shiny armor got quite rusty

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4 comments

[9] deleted user 26-Jan-03/7:27 PM Reply
Very creative, I like it
[4] horus8 26-Jan-03/8:47 PM Reply
very creative? If creativity could be bottled..your bottle would be a paper office cup.
[n/a] famenglory › horus8 27-Jan-03/12:26 PM Reply
haha... an office cup. one of the cone ones or the ones that slightly resemble a decent glass?
[4] nentwined 27-Jan-03/10:00 AM Reply
doesn't do it for me. too klunky.