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Free verse № 38381

A Puzzling Girl

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

All figured out. Sunday paper crossword puzzle. My gestures are clues, you're filling in the space between the lines I never said with your assumptions and my lies. But you were arrogant and wrong and filled the boxes in with ink, and now you're frustrated and trapped when you can't erase what you used to think.

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[4] poetandknowit 28-Jan-03/10:11 PM Reply
A nice concept but I think the overall effort need more thought.
[8] Bill Z Bub 29-Jan-03/7:17 PM Reply
The second half is excellent.