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Free verse № 39766

Magick Fingers of Love

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Feb 2003 · 4 comments

"Catch me Daddy! Catch me if you can!" i was always good for the chase. i would run after them, my beautiful boys and girls. With far reaching fingers, i would touch the back of their feathery hair. Then, as if by magick, they would twist and turn, catch a burst of speed, and escape my grasp. One by one, the magick disappeared as they came of a certain age. My extended fingers filled with air, i would catch my breath (the only thing, by the way, that I ever did manage to catch). Truly outrun and outmaneuvered, i would laugh as if nothing had changed. "Next time!" I would declare and, sure enough, next time i'd get a whisp of hair-touching close. Then off they would go, under the power of a bit of manufactured magick. They have all grown now, past the magick of the Daddy chase. i sit and wonder when the moment came with each of them, when Daddy's magick passed from his fingers into their hair. i sure can't catch them now, probably never could. copyright 2003 Thomas Paul {WORDWULF} SternerHowe

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[8] TanHand 9-Feb-03/9:57 PM Reply
Wow you wrote all of this this year jesus fuck what are you the fucking Isaac Newton of poetry. Not bad. 8.
[7] horus8 9-Feb-03/11:03 PM Reply
Dad i don't know whe... you know we'll have a good time the...
[n/a] razorgrin 10-Feb-03/9:49 AM Reply
Well that was an experience. a wise-ish man once said "those who spell magic with a 'k' aren't." I agree.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-Feb-03/3:37 PM Reply
After a jolly good read, I initially thought this poeme was about a small bean regarder. Was that the intention? Or is it more to do with the tectonic plates that underpin society, having shifted culturally, socially and politically in the previous few years?