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Lindsey's Ballad

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Feb 2003 · 2 comments

I know why The cage bird sings Its because She still has her wings One day your going to make a mistake And shes gonna go for break Shes headed out your front door And you won't see her no more I know why the damsel in distress Always Wears her best dress Its because Shes waiting for that day When prince charming will come And sweep her away I know why Lindsey still lives on Its because Her dreams still live on See that light in her eyes That light is hope Without it she'd die

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[n/a] razorgrin 11-Feb-03/9:54 AM Reply

There's a lot of cliche in the language ("caged bird")bit, but if you polished it a little, it could be good.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Feb-03/11:22 AM Reply

Hi bunny. I know we haven't always seen eye to eye, but I'm confident that if you provide a full and frank apology, we can forget about this rather unpleasant business. Friends?

The lines,

"That light is hope
Without it she'd die"

are beautiful, by the way.