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Villanelle № 40930

Eros, and Psycho

by horus8

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Feb 2003 · 10 comments

That trick you learned from Cupid Was something you could not teach How to be beautifully stupid. A foul fish with out a fluid, A rotting, seedless, immature peach That trick you learned from Cupid. In between your ears all is vapid Yes, a good subject for you to preach How to be beautifully stupid. Sorry, for being so frank and candid, but could you show my dog at the beach That trick you learned from Cupid. Because your love is pseudo morbid You only choose to deliver by breech How to be beautifully stupid. And you believe that you are splendid At a mirror you give your speech That trick you learned from Cupid How to be beautifully stupid.

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10 comments

[7] OneFingerAnswer 20-Feb-03/11:56 PM Reply
While I still find your comments on other people's poems obnoxious I must admit that I enjoyed this one. I don't understand how someone voted it a zero unless you have really enraged someone that much with your comments. I do find that some of the people here are rather fickle. 7.
[n/a] horus8 › OneFingerAnswer 21-Feb-03/12:29 AM Reply
Well, i will say that suprises me coming from you, but yes it's a promising vilanelle, and honestly (and i know that you know) i have always been blunt out of a love for what i do. As are you, so regardless of our squabbles i think now would be a good time to say... i love you.
[7] OneFingerAnswer › horus8 21-Feb-03/12:34 AM Reply
If only you had told me earlier. You see I just started another relationship and with the way things are going if you decide to wait for me it will be a long while. I'm sorry we missed out on a chance to makesomething wonderful together. Guess we'll have to stick to making just decent poems.
[10] Shardik › OneFingerAnswer 21-Feb-03/12:47 AM Reply
I suppose that will do.
[7] razorgrin 21-Feb-03/6:34 AM Reply
peculiar. i can dig it.
[8] spank me baby yeah 21-Feb-03/10:18 AM Reply
NOTHING WRONG WITH OBNOXIOUSNESS, CULTURED DUDES ARE ALWAYS THAT WAY.
THIS ROCKS, LIKE ALL THAT EROS STUFF AND ITS IMAGINATIVE. I'LL STICK TO STICKMEN FROM NOW ON
[10] Shardik 21-Feb-03/9:05 PM Reply
Why do you consistantly dwell upon your mother horus? Look at the people you attract to you by doing that. You can't fix Marrianne, let her go Grendal. just bring flowers when she breaks the ground as we all must do. then break wind.
[10] Mr Pig 25-Feb-03/12:32 PM Reply
Now thats more like it, at last all I've seen is sex sex sex and frankly I am sick of it. Thank you for this its so pleasing to see one is hungry for knowledge other than pantomime pornography.

Now my dear boy, there is something else please help me. I promised Quarton who has just posted a poem about space, that you may be able to help him with stanza 2, he may think me a darn fool but I loved stanza one but he needs to do something to stanza 2 its simply a beef wellington short of the sage, Please see what you can do I have offered some sound advice to the gentleman but theres a bloody fox trying to get at my chickens, so I must go and sound the pipe horn.
Thanks awfully my boy.

oh how rude heres a double ..10
[n/a] horus8 › Mr Pig 25-Feb-03/8:24 PM Reply
Sure, i love his stuff. let me go take a look.
[7] sanity 14-Jul-04/2:10 PM Reply
Very enjoyable